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[Sit and wait]

A foot taps anxiously, tap tap tap
As seconds tick tock by

A mind is wrapped in uselessness
As minutes tick tock by

The futility felt again denied
As hours tick tock by

And fear makes friends with boredom
As days they tick tock by

And weeks go by becoming months
As years are left for dead

The future means as much as past
And now is lost to time

The punctual make a mark, impress
The leaders of this world

But how many years are wasted,
Anxious, tapping at the ground

The tube pulls in, it's always late
As fretful souls embark

On a journey never meant to be
Any more than a destination

Yet the journey is what's experienced
As life sets on its way

I'd happily hear your thoughts
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  • TillyMay
    February 9, 2008

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    I try not to think (too often) of the time I waste- otherwise I'd go mad each time I had to queue up for something. It is something I think a lot more about now than I did when I was younger. I sometimes ask myself "is this worth the thirty minutes I'll never get back?"
    Funny how time becomes far more valuable when you think you have less of it.
    Clever- I do love a poem that gets me thinking.
    Nicely done, Westley.