nature's hammer
pounding forcefully
tearing wide fissures
in the earth
spraying. pounding.
a violent thing
born of glacial ice
and carried by the weight
of the earth itself
turning deep blue
into white mist
and beating boulders into sand
A contest entry
- Another Ansel Adams Contest by poetryality.
525 points, ended February 10, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This poem has a nice flow to it and your words conjure vivid images. A pleasure to read!
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Liked the visions these words bring to mind, just not sure why the two periods are in that one line. Stops the natural flow of the piece. Nice HM - congratulations.
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Wonderful images sewn throughout this weaving poet. I feel the rush of the Falls in your words. A stunning entry. Thank you!
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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