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Find Yourself

Rediscover your youth
image your dreams into reality
Open the chest within your soul
The chest of wonders.. that has darkened with time
Release the childhood desires you locked away
so long ago...

Regain your pure heart
  and all your burdens will disappear
See yourself through the eyes of the pure-hearted child
    you once were

fly away
across the sea
free your soul

Do not be a fraid to explore
Do not fear life or death

You are a chest
      full of wonders

rediscover the child within
Find Yourself Again

Author notes

My first attempt at freewriting. Inspired by the song 'Dark Chest of Wonders' by Nightwish.
I think this is the formula for both happiness and longevity. Can't hurt to try.

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  • Endeavor gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    Very Good


    You are a chest
    full of wonders

    rediscover the child within
    Find Yourself Again


    Great theam to write on
    I was in Toyko in 1968
    Lots of people, amazing

    Rick


  • Pisces Pieces
    February 15, 2008

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    It's inspirational and most definitely beautiful...if you can follow the path of which you speak here, I believe you are right about the formula! You have to want to find yourself and be willing to search, and have patience!

    Wonderful!!(is not even an adequate word) This is not an attempt, it is success!



  • Pear Shaped Parrot
    February 13, 2008

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    I like it alot, it flowed well and felt really poetic.

    Lets see how long you live..



    On another note I hate you!!!!

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