i stand before you looking up into your eyes
as the tears flow from my eyes
take me away from all this please my love
i am hurting and no longer wish to be like this
you pull me into your arms and whisper i'll take you away
i bury my head in your chest and closed my eyes
i felt you pick me up and caryy me too your car
you drove away and kept going
you smile over at me and say we are going and never coming back
my love has given me a smile back as we drive away
away from the home life i hate
the life that i do not wanna have and i can start a new
Author notes
hope this is what you meant
A contest entry
- Give Me A Life... by TeenageTears.
300 points, ended February 19, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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Yes this is exactly what I meant! Are you reading my mind? lol
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