Hearts broken,
dreams shattered.
Daddies gone,
mommies hurting.
Despair
(C) Nichole A.Dustin
2/10/2008
Author notes
contest prompt.. 9 words to answer this question "Father, why are all the little children weeping....?"
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Excellent Writing
I can't add anything to what other's Comments have said so well (i.e.-kareneisenlord, smonte19124, tawk).
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Yes the losss of a parent can be so hard, I know we are still trying to cope with my husband's father passing last Sept we miss him so much. Amazing and heartfelt write. I am sorry for your loss.
Theresa
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Powerfully written! Very sad, too.
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A powerful reponse to the prompt. I am always amazed when I read something that says so much in so few words, as this poem does so wonderfully. Great job and I enjoyed this poem very much. Blessings, Patty
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that puts the pain and hurtful consequences of a broken home and family dysfunction in a nutshell. Very good job with the prompt.
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A lot said in so few words. God Bless
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very powerful write with intense emotions, enough to break any heart....
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A very powerful sad poem.... great job .. good luck in the contest..
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What a sad answer to a very complex
question. In all of our problems, it is
the children who suffer the most. good
luck in the contest.
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Very sad and emotional, more of a soft approach then so far. Nicely done, well written.
Thanks for entering,
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This is so sad and powerful! Keep writing and good luck in the contest!
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tis a sad write you share. thanks for penning. success in this contest.
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