It was raining,
The roots in me,
a defeated beast!
Saw a maze on the grass.
My heart!
It rained,
I was tamed.
But still my heart.
Lost!
Too hard, too cold!
Author notes
Lost...but still its too hard and cold!
A contest entry
- Heart Of Glass by Naridill.
525 points, ended February 9, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like the image that comes with this..you've done a great job here and I wish you the best of luck
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short and sweet i like it. it was pain and saddness in it i like the deep thought thats in the short poem u wrought it would take me days to think this up lol nice work
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Intriguing and still captivating, love the different response you held here. Nicely done.
Thanks for entering,
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