Captured cascading mist
and a kiss for nature
from on high,
an almighty surge
of heavenly tears
collected
spilling onto earth
liberal and fresh
like a spring rain
espousing a dream
that softly panders to
feminine sensibility.
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Ansel Adams Contest by poetryality.
525 points, ended February 10, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your words are beautiful, the picture fit perfectly also,
it was like waking up on a morning and splashing cold water on my face
refreshing
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awww congrationlations on the trophy, this was so beautiful i could just feel the mist trickeling amoung my face, it was a beautiful poem to read, and i think i shall read it agin, because it is so lovely lol =)
stephanei
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Wonderful words used in this poem - liked the alliteration used as you interpreted the picture served to inspire us in this contest. COngratulations on winning silver.
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A very soothing work of poetry with sprits of thunderous mist to caress the brow. Simply beautiful! Thank you for this entry.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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beautiful
i can really see how this poem would be inspired by alaska
"liberal and fresh
like a spring rain"
love it
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It seems to me that your appreciation of the beauty of nature compliments the way in which you relate to people, women especially. You choose such beautiful words to express emotions and they appear to fall like a mist around me as I read.
Best wishes in the contest, Michael.
Margaret
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What a beautiful piece of poetry you have
penned here. It is descriptive and also
deep in emotion. great job
good luck in the contest. -
This beautiful and striking piece overflows with imagery. You have created a masterpiece!!! Good luck!
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Breathtaking
This is amazing and so beautiful. What wonderful imagery and emotion within your words. Peaceful and serene. I so enjoyed reading. I am so glad that Sunflowerbeauty has such a wonderful ap father in you. I love being her Mother, she is such a blessing to all. Again amazing write
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This is poetically stunning and filled with vivid imagery of grace and splendor... x Best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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now waht could be a more noble cause then to take up a dream thet panders to womens sensebility? this sound like a very wise man to me one who has learned teh best two words in teh english language thet will keep you wife happy is "yes dear"
best of luck to you in you chosen contest
bel ange
jan ♥
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Mysterious are the ways feminine sensibility flows...you look at the right places to appreciate that
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beautiful imagery...
I feel a 'mist' of a kiss on my face reading this! So lovely...
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