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A Moment in Time

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Captured cascading mist
and a kiss for nature
from on high,

an almighty surge
of heavenly tears
collected

spilling onto earth
liberal and fresh
like a spring rain

espousing a dream
that softly panders to
feminine sensibility.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 13

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    awww congrationlations on the trophy, this was so beautiful i could just feel the mist trickeling amoung my face, it was a beautiful poem to read, and i think i shall read it agin, because it is so lovely lol =)
    stephanei


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 10

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    Wonderful words used in this poem - liked the alliteration used as you interpreted the picture served to inspire us in this contest. COngratulations on winning silver.

  • poetryality silver member
    February 10

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    A very soothing work of poetry with sprits of thunderous mist to caress the brow. Simply beautiful! Thank you for this entry.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee

  • bluejeanbaby
    February 10

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    beautiful

    i can really see how this poem would be inspired by alaska

    "liberal and fresh
    like a spring rain"

    love it


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    February 9

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    It seems to me that your appreciation of the beauty of nature compliments the way in which you relate to people, women especially. You choose such beautiful words to express emotions and they appear to fall like a mist around me as I read.

    Best wishes in the contest, Michael.

    Margaret


  • paullallady silver member
    February 9

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    What a beautiful piece of poetry you have
    penned here. It is descriptive and also
    deep in emotion. great job
    good luck in the contest.

  • daviscth gold member
    February 9

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    This beautiful and striking piece overflows with imagery. You have created a masterpiece!!! Good luck!


  • tawk gold member
    February 9

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    Breathtaking

    This is amazing and so beautiful. What wonderful imagery and emotion within your words. Peaceful and serene. I so enjoyed reading. I am so glad that Sunflowerbeauty has such a wonderful ap father in you. I love being her Mother, she is such a blessing to all. Again amazing write


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    February 9

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    This is poetically stunning and filled with vivid imagery of grace and splendor... x Best wishes to you in this contest... x Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.

  • Bel Ange gold member
    February 9

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    now waht could be a more noble cause then to take up a dream thet panders to womens sensebility? this sound like a very wise man to me one who has learned teh best two words in teh english language thet will keep you wife happy is "yes dear"
    best of luck to you in you chosen contest

    bel ange
    jan ♥

  • ashjoe76
    February 9

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    Mysterious are the ways feminine sensibility flows...you look at the right places to appreciate that


  • ardentMarch gold member
    February 9

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    beautiful imagery...



    I feel a 'mist' of a kiss on my face reading this! So lovely...

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