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[ My dearest will you be you be my sweet Valentine ]

My dearest will you be you be my sweet Valentine
I offer to you myself for the evening for some wine and dine
We will drink the finest of Merlot
Then step to the floor and dance to and fro
As the soft music lingers in the enchanted air
I would hold oh so tight to the handsome Ted E Bare

As I take your hand we would walk casually outside
Into the breathtaking gardens so close, side by side
We would embrace in a passionate kiss as the rain began to pour
Oh, but that my dear is not all there is so much more
Once our clothes was drenched by the enticing rain
We would lay down in the garden without any shame

Our clothes would soon be piled upon the rain soaked ground
As our bodies entwined together our hearts would pound
The rain would wash over our bodies as we made sweet love
So what do you say my sweet turtle dove
Are you ready for me to put on something sexy and treat you as my king
Then lets make some plans and see what surprises Valentines can bring

A contest entry

Be honest, do I totally stink at poems? :) lol

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 11, 2008

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    You do know how to get to a Ted E Bare's heart through the rain. Your entry is pure magic in each drop of rain that splashes down. I want to thank you for entering my "Valentine's for APs Ted E Bare" contest.

    Ted E

  • SusanAlembic
    February 10, 2008

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    Good one!

    Wow that was a good one there aww now now shame on you for saying you stink on that someone needs to spank you LOL Shhh i better hush someone could be listening to that LMAO good job there you did better than I could ever do aww so lovely and sweet smooches Lol

  • Blooming Poet
    February 8, 2008
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    it's a beautiful plan and this is a beautiful poem for valentines and that special someone.