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Transfiguration

Temptation smothers
chastity, piety
disintegrates, as
God-fearing girl
transforms from saint
to bloodthirsty sinner.

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Prompt: Grace
15 words for Marky!

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    so beautifully written with a darkness in your rooms aswell as imagery. well done and congrats on the bronze hun


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Brilliant bronze winner you have penned here. So many different takes on this word prompt that served to inspire writers for this contest.


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 8, 2008
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    Wow, now that is a statement!!! Good take from the prompt.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 8, 2008
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    I'd let you drink my blood.


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 8, 2008

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    oooh best of luck with this one

    Tasha


  • ValentineSvetlana
    February 8, 2008
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    Fantastic, to say the least, because sometimes a new take on religion is most fascinating.

  • Liquid memories
    February 8, 2008

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    wow, what 15 words you have used. am in awe of the message. well done.

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