I bought a new toy.
Batteries not included.
May cause orgasm.
A contest entry
- Laugh out Loud by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended September 12, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My second attempt at these
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Well I think I need me one of those 
Haiku is fun, humourous and cheeky all together - Great job hun
Congratulations on the Honourable Mention
♥
Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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oh god thats hillarious.
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lol.... you forgot Beware: ... I know it doesn't fit with a Haiku but still... it's too funny. ~ I luv'ed it!
Clever write! Thanks for submitting it~ it was an enjoyable read.
Best of luck to you....
Florida Sunshine
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hmmm silly
lol
like the warning
thank you so much for the entry
--kat
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Silly and shocking. you did a good job.
thanks for your entry in my contest. -
LMAO talk about straight to the point! Don't forget to pick up the batteries! Good luck in the contest with it
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If this isn't getting to the point, I don't know what is lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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That Kind of says it all--Good luck in the contest
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OMG roflmao @ this Haiku of yours. that last line has me ballin in laughter but I really loved where you went with this Haiku. for a second attmept this was quite a mighty powerful haiku and I really liked it. you really have quite a good taste for wording and it is just so well penned. keep up the great work as always
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L M A O!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!
brought a new toy home
stocked up on batteries
haven't left home since
lol
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Haha. Clever. Short and definitely to-the-point.
Thanks for entering!
-Sonya -
New toy under bed
and with a full charge for me,
will bring me pleasure!
Indeed what a new toy can do...
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