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Three simple questions

Darling, on this valentine's day
Three questions did surface...

Each answered through touch, love, and emotion:

How do I know I love you?

Every time we dance
As lovers often do
Between the sheets of cotton,
Under our home and roof
Each inch closer
Grazing my skin
Feeling my sweet points
Of bodily warmth
I can feel your merciful soul
Delve deep under
The depths of my skin
Crawling throughout my body
Tickling each nerve as it passes
Sending a wave of arousal
Making me want your body
Closer yet to my heart

How do you know I love you?

When you kiss me
Ever so lightly
Upon my ever anxious lips
I drown in your bedeviled actions
When you give in
And can tease no more
As you ease your way in
Intimately watching me
For that first sign of pleasure
As you continue
Making love in such passion
You look only to my own
To pleasure me before yourself
But when I’ve had my all
I call out to you
To fully share my love

How do we know love?

As we lay there
Submitting to the aftermath
We replay the amorous dance
Reliving each moment
To its full extent
Then turn to one another
A new fire within out eyes
And silently pass three silent words
Whose meanings will not translate
You may think of “I Love You”
But these we do not say
For the look we give
Has no translation
No words could be said
To describe such a feeling
Would be to describe…

Nothing short of a miracle

…To my Miracle
With Love,
Chelsey Diane Crouchley

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  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    I love your questions contained in this write and how they are the crux of it. I especially like how the questions relate to each other and have different aspects of view point. Your responses to them were majestic and loving. Divine and powerful... Your ending line is phenominal as well. "Nothing short of a miracle" ~ that is what love is all about.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • rosepoet
    February 10, 2008
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    Beautiful feelings of love expressed here. Good luck in the contest