You're my double-edged
sword, my contradiction.
Your love is cold, your
kisses warm, igniting my
senses; You draw me closer,
yet push me away, in the
same tantalizing touch.
Delicious heat pushes past
icy lips, quivering in
glorious anticipation.
Author notes
Pic-inspired: 40 words, for Kat.
In a list
A contest entry
- QUICKIE! Are You Curious? by Nighttime angel.
540 points, ended February 8, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow!
I love it and it is a unique take on the prompt. Great job and congratulations on the Silver. Well deserved.
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ohoh this is such a beautiful piece my dark companion. your wording is amazing well done and congrats on the silver.
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oh my...
you incorporated so much into forty words! LOL
I am so impressed! very, very well done...
you took us through all the seasons...emotionally...
great write!!!
thank you for penning this wonderful journey!
Blessings! Tammy
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Laura, this wasn't quite what I was expecting, but I love it. I like surprises. and with this poem you delivered. I like the hot & cold aspect of this. superb job.
good luck in the contest
kat
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Was not expecting this take on the prompt nice piece sweety goodluck in the contest much love always
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I like this.
yeppers
W00t!
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