windchill drops
whiteout blankets road
winter activity
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
Now that is a frigid winter and well I could envisualize all of this taking place through out your Haiku and I am a sucker who loves winter but this is just an amazing well defined poem. any ways keep up the very good work and keep penning away -
I really like the simplicity that paints
a vivid scene and the beginnings in
identical sound. Blue
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You have just described the week we
have had in michigan and only in a
few words!! You painted a picture
with your description. great job
good luck in the contest.
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windchill drops
whiteout blankets road
winter activity
Oh, true winter scene here, with lots of snow! Blow some my way! Thank you so much!
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This definitely sounds like "winter activity"...lol. Fun stuff.... but tooooo cold.
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Ooo, sounds like Chicago. Well we hadn't had a white out yet. We are supposed to get more snow on Sunday and it is supposed to be a high of 9 degrees farenheit. BRRRR.
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