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And We Pray

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And We Pray

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senryu style but with modern theme..... not traditional subject..... thanks for reading and commenting. I'm not a religious fanatic but do enjoy spiritual exchange and experience. My life has been better for it.
Written November 20th, 2003

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  • Naughtygrlred
    November 21, 2003
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    i think praying is good for some people im glad you have faith i know i do


  • November 21, 2003
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    The three lines of the haiku, the triptych, and the Trinity.
    Says a lot in so small a space.


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    November 21, 2003
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    This is just the kind of message the world needs right now, and what a great shot!

    One question - when are you going to come out with "HaikuMonk's Photoku's - The Complete Collection."? Maybe you could put them all on 3D Viewfinder discs. Now that would be cool!

    But seriously, your words always match your photos perfectly, and the photos are great. They always give me a very peaceful feeling.

    Thanks!

    Mark

  • Glitch
    November 21, 2003
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    very touching poem. fabulous presentation and a great message. way to go haikumonk!


  • ShadyLass
    November 21, 2003
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    Short and sweet. I enjoyed reading it.
    ~Amanda~

  • Poes-Bro
    November 20, 2003
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    short sweet and simple

    nice


  • santori
    November 20, 2003
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    Some religions seduce me just with their prettiness. A very beautiful poem.



    For me I think its 'Goodness' of which Love is a part.


  • Ava Noire silver member
    November 20, 2003
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    Lovely Don. The pic, the words - all just pretty pretty.

    I'm not a religious fanatic either but just being around someone who is praying gives me comfort somehow...




  • poetgirl25
    November 20, 2003
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    Amen...what a beautiful poem and breathtaking picture...and whether one is particularly religious or not, the universal theme of peace and love applies to all of us. This is a deeply moving and inspirational piece. I'll look at it often. Thank you for your sharing your gifts and talent with us. Lily
    Edited on Nov 20, 11:27 because ''.


  • UncleSpace
    November 20, 2003
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    very nice!

    This is very cool, cosmic, common, and universal at the same time. A beautiful message everyone should keep in mind. Lovely photo too.
    Unc


  • Pamela
    November 20, 2003
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    Beautiful!
    Unified through love
    love is life, life is love
    much love & peace
    ~Pamela


  • Lurie
    November 20, 2003
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    Don this is really beautiful!!!!!

    One God.
    Many names.
    He hears us all..........Laura


  • Sara Bellem
    November 20, 2003
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    Thanks

    Very Nice I loved the meaning of this poem & from looking at your author page & the pictures you have you have quite a talent. Thank you for reading my poem "Please Don't Save Me" I'm sorry it made you sad I'm a lil down right now but reading you comment especially about tickling me made my day Thanks ---Sara

  • fallen-angels
    November 20, 2003
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    Very cool. Love is the last hope we have, and you captured it nicely. Well done.


  • ZePoet
    November 20, 2003
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    This is absolutely beautiful and the message is universal. I am not religious but very spiritual, for I know that the Creator of all things dwells among us and in evreything that breathes. Excellent visual and words to match.

    Denise

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