Standing here
In front of you
My heart broken
My dreams shattered
All thanks to you
Tears running down my face as I shout at you
Cursing you
Raging, railing
Fighting the bonds
You placed on me
Flinging words at you
Driving my knives deep
Flaying you open
Down to your core
So the whole world can see
What you did to me
The darkness that is you
The rock where a heart SHOULD be
The lies you told
The way you made me bleed
You turned me inhuman
A shadow of what was
Driving you away
Fighting for every breath
Screaming
Wanting to find my way back
But unable to
All thanks
To you
To the way you broke me
So I stand here
And pen
The Darkest words I ever wrote
Using my blood as the ink
Tears falling freely
These words
That break what's left of my heart
Are very simple
They are
Goodbye, forever
A contest entry
- Taking it out on you... by Flightless Raven.
1200 points, ended February 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I apologize for being human...
Comments
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This is sad to say the least. I know heart break seems unbearable, but God's love never ends. That is the love that people seem to forget to look for, lean on, depend upon. Life becomes turbulent in these wicked days of pain. Sorry for your feelings, hope you can find it in yourself to pick yourself back up.
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it's never easy to pick the pieces back up.. but I am trying..
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Wondeful..
You know, itś funny that sense you´re one of my favs and this is an anonymous contest the poem showed up on the homepage at the same time it did on my messages.. xD lol...awesome work, hun.. hope whatever inspired this passes wiht as little pain as possible.
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