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[ take the nife slide it as deep as you want ]

take the nife slide it as deep as you want
because im sick of you im sick of them
im just getting hurt
no i dont want to hurt him
but you dont think that i sould be happy
i accepted you for who you like
why cant you
i dont care for mate
and they sures the hell dont care for me

and if they are your boy/girl friend they are your friend also
at least thats the way i was taught my mom dad don and connie
you can think what you like though

and if you have a prob with him you also have one with me
and im sorry i wont get rid of him cuz u dont like him
and truely i dont want to lose you either
and if it comes down to it ill just fuck i dont know what i would do

im sorry maybe i dont diserve to be happy

just random

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  • Lonely Christina
    November 16, 2008
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    is ur name molly benish by any chance? lol


  • Rize
    February 29, 2008
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    thats so strong, but a little negative, try saying you deserve to be happy with whom you want to and would still be able to be a friend to the person you're talking to....i love this poem, but please look at your solutions before you come to a conclusion....love ya


  • Emm Jayy
    February 27, 2008

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    It sounds to me like your friend doesn't deserve to be your friend. Especially if he/she doesn't want you to be happy. Doesn't sound like a real friend to me.

    And TESIA... Everyone deserves to be happy.

    • tjj
      March 1, 2008
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      thanks alot but i dont want to lose my friend but your not the first to tell me that which kinda makes me think that its suposed to happen but i truely dont want it to


  • Tears-of-Love
    February 8, 2008
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    no like i said go ahead keep him i dont care anymore

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