Bring us your tired and dying
We will set them free
Darkness brings them to us
Light will help them be
Sky is where we look
To find a sense of life
And to bring a thought of peace
To everything we've done
In this circle of our lives
We will know many things
As there was a beginning here
There will surely be an end
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Judged by RedwingSpirit.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 10 entries
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475 points, ended April 9, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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As there was a beginning here there will surely be an end...... such prophetic words!!! You did a wonderful job here and congrats on the HM....
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what an amazing picture it has so much, so much to be inspired from and boy wern't you eva
this flowed so well, so many of your worss uplifting.
bring a thought of peace -- sky is where we look
Brilliant, Congrat's on the HM, very deserving
Cindy
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Excellent!!
Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest. I wish you the best of luck with it.
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