I Knew a girl with a penchant for pain and a deep love for grass.
She was heavy, had a slant in her brain and wanted a dick up her ass,
Not much wrong with the picture except for imminent cancer.
A Seizure everytime I recall because not even plastic surgery would have made her a dancer.
She couldn't walk straight sober let alone snorting instant death,
She was so high it was like kissing a canteen of meth.
Break my heart, okay? Just get away.
You're not my type 'cause you just can't keep those fuckin' flies at bay.
I just want to fuck and forget 'cause you're not worth my time.
I just want to fuckin' let you know that you're not worth my time.
I just want to fuck and forget, 'cause you don't know the meaning of leaving.
I just want to fuckin' let you know that I'm leaning on the side of leaving.
She couldn't breathe 'cause her lungs were eaten by maggots.
How could I tell her that thongs looked better on faggots?
She couldn't sell herself on the corner for a quarter,
So fucked up at sixteen that she'll never have daughter.
So low her self esteem so I thought I'd lie and watch her lose,
So low her self esteem I hoped she'd die from all the booze.
Can't we forget the past? Just tear down all the walls.
I can't forget the past, I just remembered she had no walls.
I just want to fuck and forget, 'cause you can't hold a conversation.
I just want to fuckin' let you know the obesity clinic denied your reservation.
I just want to fuck and forget, because you were never worth a rhyme.
I just want to fuckin' let you know; You were never worth my time.
Author notes
Enjoy.
*edited 2/9/08, saw typo "Tear Town All The Walls" And has since then been "Tear Down All The Walls"
(Contest: My AP Name is XChrisUnknownX)
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This is quite a nice little song. I could imagine a group of naked hot gospellers singing it in some hideously vulgar Baptist Reformed Ultra-Strict Chapel in the Bible Belt.
If all the lines were as good as this
"How could I tell her that thongs looked better on faggots?" I would give it a gold cup.
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Glad you liked it well enough, just wish my mind had made all the lines just that well.
=] Thank you. Have a beautiful evening.
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This was a really good write and unlike most I actually know who this is for and I find relief in knowing that you have found away to channel the hurt and anger through poetry. It's beautiful
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Heh.
Been a long time, but I write as they come.
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it's good, some of the rhyme was kind of forced but it's really vivd and I loved reading it.
Thanks
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Thanks.
Glad you enjoyed. I always do what I can, sometimes the words don't flow to me perfectly as I'd prefer.
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Wow. I honestly think that this goes far above the contest you entered it into. You have written something so climatic and powerful... vulgar or not... this was amazing.
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Thank you.
Thanks tons. Tried my best to refrain from tapping the rating button multiple times now, heheh.
Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it; my latest streaks of creativity have been pretty dark and violent, and I figure they're better here than someone else's body or property...
I'm going to bookmark you so I can read your things when I come off this morbid, self-induced high.
I don't touch a thing... But I still dive pretty deep.
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