Won’t You Be My Valentine?
Won’t You Be My Valentine?
Take A Walk With Me?
I’m yours. Will you be mine?
With no one else I’d rather be.
No chocolate hearts, but then again;
There’ll be a million more.
Know there’s no girl greater than,
The one I’m writing for.
Won’t you be my Valentine?
Sit and talk with me?
I’m yours. Would you be mine?
You’re the only one I see.
A contest entry
- Valentine Poetry... a contest for teens age 13 to 18 by Melodies.
600 points, ended February 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bring Your Greatest Valentine Poems by rosepoet.
415 points, ended February 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter All Your Love Writes Here! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very sweet, and I loved the simple rhyme you used.
"Know there’s no girl greater than,
The one I’m writing for."
This is my favorite part of the poem, because it sounds so good with the rhyme and flow. Also, it references to the actual poem, and I find those type of things concrete for the write itself.
Thanks for entering your write in "Enter All Your Love Writes Here!", and good luck!
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Thanks very much, quite a bit of thought was put into this, as it was for my current girlfriend, heheh. Glad it was enjoyable for both her and your own reading.
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Beautiful entry good luck in the contest poet
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Thank you very much.
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very pretty poem here, nicely written and easy to read thank you for entering and goodluck Moons
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Heh.
Glad to have entered, thank you for the compliment.
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AWWWWWW!! What a sweet Valentine!
You print this out and give it to someone special, you hear? 
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You bet
I wrote it a few days ago. My girlfriend is up 8 hours from here in college, and I figured it'd make a good partner with the teddy bear I mailed her.
So your advice is very well taken.
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