Poor trodden pilgrams
search for a better life.
Carrying their woes and problems.
Anxious of what the afterlife holds.
Be not afraid,
God loves all of humankind.
No disase or cancr here,
no heartache or pain.
Walk through the door
to a more simplier being.
HE has healed you
and welcomes you to his kingdom.
Welcome to a higher existence.
Peace awaits you at the gate.
The entrance opens before you.
Will you step inside?
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Comments
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I like that it is a really touching piece. Good Luck
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Great take of my prompt!!
Great take of my prompt!!
Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest. I wish you the best of luck with it.


