leave the past behind:
retain only those parts
labelled experience
A contest entry
- Weekend Haiku by azure85.
600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 19 entries
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This doesn't really work as haiku, in my opinion anyway.
The message is very good though.
Wish you luck with all you do.
Mari
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experience
experience is always in the past.
your epigram provides a little conundrum for my little brain (perhaps because it's 3.33am).
best wishes,
myron. -
a wise proverb !
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a philoso-ku.... lol I always enjoy trying to write them as well.
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leave the past behind:
retain only those parts
labelled experience
Very thoughtful, and it contains some good advice. Thank you so much!
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It's not a proper haiku, but I guess it doesn't really matter.
Wise advice, not a bad poem either.
~*~Kat C~*~
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