Engaging in the cycle of mankinds journeys.
I beseech you thus,
to become 'man to brother'
'Child to man ', and bestow us well.
Within the knowledge of our nurturing,
to further us as ambassadors,
to move forward in love and harmony,
for our brothers and sisters.
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Preach
Understanding and forebearance
Tolerance and humility for all mankind.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Judged by RedwingSpirit.
525 points, ended March 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - INVITE ONLY from PIF Quickie Judged by RedwingSpirit.
475 points, ended April 9, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Worthy sentiments and a great take on the prompt picture.
Well deserving of the honour!
Sol
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thank you soloman . i am glad you have read some of my earlier poems and liked them
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Love the picture, and the words were deep loved this poem!
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thanks danielle,, i forgot i did it thanks for reminding me xx hugs
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Excellwent write here Peter
So is we all so dream of butr few follows through .I do hope one day this world would shut everything off and within the silence hear the heartbeat that makes this world alive and know it beats in harmony why cant we
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thank you dear,,, thank you xx
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Thoughts of many I'm sure - but we never seem to get it quite right? Nicely written.
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lustful we all are sis, we are poets remember , hugs ans squeezes xx
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thanks dear anna xx hugs
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WOW....this makes an excellent point! I'm really impressed...
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it didnt win anything though boohoo, glad you like it xx
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Different take than I expected but this is nice.
Thank you for taking the time to enter this poem into my contest. I wish you the best of luck with it.
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Very encompassing and enthralling. A decent piece to be sure, good luck
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thank you,,i have edited, if you wish to read again, i sincerely hope you approve ...pp
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Well written...you paint a peaceful picture...
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peace is all we need,, for harmony and happiness, no war here. best wishes pp
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