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I Threw Out

I threw out
him and his gear
final fling

A contest entry

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  • albymyheart gold member
    February 11, 2008
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    I like the play on words "final fling" very clever. Good luck in the contest.
    alby


  • funpum
    February 10, 2008
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    Love it. Love the word play. Good luck!


  • Kitesen
    February 10, 2008
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    I hope you throw 7's with this one

    nice haiku.

    Wim


  • DogFish silver member
    February 9, 2008
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    VERY EMPHATIC !

    On a technical note: I would title this "Final Fling". It might add a tad more irony.


  • azure85 gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    I threw out
    him and his gear
    final fling

    I hope it felt good too! Your haiku describes it well, thank you so much!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 9, 2008

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    Oh..what a sharp endged poetry with so much powerful words..they are few but very strong and bearing the truhs of life...

  • Blue Moose
    February 8, 2008

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    lol. funny. i like this. it's short, to the point and descriptive. i can actually see this happening. good luck.

    mark

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