At my child hood days, as my destined motto
what is taught as morals I was practising them in toto
Youth prompted me to tell lies
and my college days then were never rosy in files
Mid age advised me to go slow on promises
as unkept promises , as was told ,deposit the heavy stake of sins in my divine account in multiple devices
At this autumn age every thing
that allowed me to flourish and flew me high in my past years
scares me and keeps me always away
from the things that all prove to be the worst
and just try easily to well my eyes in tears
Author notes
just well my eyes in tears
A contest entry
- Show me what scares you by Danna Hobart.
300 points, ended February 9, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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At my child hood days... childhood is one word.
practising them in toto... you misspelled practicing.
Mid-age should be hyphenated.
At this autumn age every thing ... everything is one word.
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