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Guardian Angel

He stood there before me
An angel in the night
He brought out light so I could see
And protected me so I did not have to fight
He wiped away my tears
And held me in his arms
He told me there was nothing to fear
For he would let nothing bring me harm
He fought away the shadows
That had plagued me for so long
And now I finally know
The place where I belong
I belong beside him,
My guardian angel
He opened his heart and let me in
And caught me when I fell

Author notes

I believe that everyone has a guardian angel....

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  • cindy4
    February 14, 2008
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    Very good write.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    February 8, 2008
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    Excellent

    This is an excellent write--Well worded versed and structured---Beautiful wording!---WRITE MORE--


  • Candy6
    February 8, 2008
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    Great write.


  • Sle3p
    February 8, 2008

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    Great job, How long have you been writing?Well, anyways welcome to AllPoetry...This is such a great poem (i could never write like this when I first got on AllPoetry) I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see more poetry you write I'll be sure to look. If you have any questions about the site you can ask the greeters, or me. See you around I guess!

    Fluffy