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chilly north wind

chilly north wind
shivers remaining tree leaves
snow on the way

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  • Kitesen
    February 10, 2008
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    golf course
    three holes down
    snowrabbits

    ©Wim

    Good luck


  • myron silver member
    February 10, 2008

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    cool

    this is a very cool haiku - no i'm wrong, it's a very cold haiku.

    best of luck in the contest,
    myron.


  • haikumonk gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    Ahhh.... this makes me appreciate southern california all the more... as I look out over the sunny golf course.... and relax...


  • azure85 gold member
    February 9, 2008

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    chilly north wind
    shivers remaining tree leaves
    snow on the way

    Oh, that is how it feels like here, but the snow never comes! A very nice seasonal haiku, great images. Thank you so much!