Dancing in the cool breeze
Watching the leaves fall
The wind is like music
Twirling gracefully
Letting the wind
Take away my pain and sorrow
Peacefully I wonder
Through the colorful forest
Feels like a dream
The wind carries my soul
To a bright and sunny tomorrow
As today comes to a full
Humming a tune
As the wind carries the melody
The melody of my beautiful soul
Author notes
Option 10
A contest entry
- Pif and Inspire :- Many Options by Reptile Lady.
825 points, ended February 9, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful work ere
You have penned a great write here and I enjoyed it ever so much good luck in the contest -
This is a delightful poem of such sweet words that capture the scene within this prompt
Like the way you used melody within this too
Thanks for your entry
Julie
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