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The Chains of Freedom (Lyrics)

When I feel, my, life
Begins to succumb
To eternal strife,
I feel so numb
To a burning knife,
A path to nowhere.

As you hold, my, hands
I begin to see
These dire lands,
I tend to flee
From the world’s demands
A path to nowhere.

[pre-chorus]
Dreaming a pit and a restless fire
Inside the claws of my own desire
Dreaming of sunshine and dreaming of fate
My knees hit the ground and I say:

[Chorus]
Follow me inside, I can take you away
Look me in the eyes, say you want to stay
As the sky is torn and the ground is shred
We begin to fly, soaring in my head.
[End Chorus]

When I feel, the, light
Slipping away
To eternal night,
I start to sway,
Towards my lonely plight
A path to nowhere.

As you touch, my, face,
I begin to hear
The quiet pace,
I tend to fear
That it’s out of place
A path to nowhere.

[pre-chorus]
Feeling the cold and the freezing rain
Supporting the shelf to your arctic pain
Feeling the hardship and feeling the hate
My knees hit the ground and I say:

[Chorus]
Follow me inside, I can take you away
Look me in the eyes, say you want to stay
As the sky is torn and the ground is shred
We begin to fly, soaring in my head

Follow me inside, I can take you away
Look me in the eyes, say you want to stay

Follow me inside, I can take you away
Look me in the eyes, say you want to stay
As the sky is torn and the ground is shred
We begin to fly, soaring in my head
[End Chorus]

As you hold, my, hands
I begin to see
These dire lands,
I tend to flee
From the world’s demands
A path to nowhere.
A path to nowhere.
A path to nowhere.

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Comments

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  • it is no wonder you pop in here and there - i can see the reason why. a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly.
  • 'follow me inside' good refrain good rhymes in the chorus strong ending thanks for sharing with us regards zaj

    . Rewarded 4


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    February 19
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    this is very cool. keep up the writing,
  • pruedence
    February 19

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    I could feel this a s a song..wish I knew the tune...it flowed well, and the meaning within the song many could relate with. Welld done, thanks for sharing

  • Ms.Hippie
    February 19

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    these are some REALLY good lyrics! I could hear more of a rock genre coming out of them, but it would work with whatever type of genre you prefer! I love it!
    Love
    Ms. Hippie
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