Sweet scented candles, dimly light up this room.
Two bodies, two souls entwined in passion as one.
His hands massage her body, as his sweet
lips caress it, all over. Gentle sounds of
true love escape each of their mouths.
Hours spent like this, with kisses all over
and beautiful love making. The candles get low,
they both wish for the night not to end.
In each other's arms, tears coming down their
faces, three simple words from their mouths, "I love you."
A contest entry
- Sensual Delights. (Judged Tonight) by delightfulmess.
700 points, ended February 8, 2008, 9 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful
It was beautifully written, captivating, and rich in descripition. One of the only love poems I have EVER adored. It was so adorable and passionate at the same time, it's one you can't stop reading. Brilliant; applausing a love poem for probably the first time this year. It all flowed together, and you were brave enough to continue lines. I liked it as a whole. -
Awww so beautifully put, I wish I could have that intimacy with the one that I adore, but alas I doubt that will be for the longest of times. This is so romantic though and warming, it makes me feel warm inside.
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Very nice, was short but elegantly done. The imagery was soft with the description of candlelight filling it with such romance. Thank you for entering
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hmmm.. this is short and sweet . it makes me go AWWWWWWWWW (yes , i went on for like 10 secs) lol love it!
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OMG im speechless , so sensual, loving, captivating and entrancing hehe
Beautiful darl, beautiful
Cindy
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Awe... This is precious. Very romantic
and fitting for the V-day.
thank you for your entry in my contest.
Delila
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Well done painting a moment when those words actually mean something. Bravo.
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Wonderful
Very descriptive and so well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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