Have all that I need standing right in front of me
But why
Why does her love for you make me shutter
The green eyed devil will never take over
I will never give in
But if they weren't together
If you didn't love her
If she disliked you
I would feel normal
Satisfied
And free of mr.green eyed devil
A contest entry
- Love... Envy... Fabulous by Pretty Britty.
750 points, ended April 4, 2008, 46 entries
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I feel this piece was slightly lacking... like there was more of the story to tell?? I'm not sure. Hmm... it is intriguing though.
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhh interesting........... who is this about I wonder? hmmmmm...... If your green-eyed devil is an alter-ego then cool. if it is an actual person (possiblely the person he is in love with?) then also cool. this can be interpreted in many ways, but all of them are an interesting and new possiblity. I like it. good job. you made me think when I wasn't planning to!
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THANKS!
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