Tear drops on rose petals
You're a blade in my heart
My addiction of passion
I'm falling apart
Hold me or hang me
I beg you don't leave
Have me and hurt me
Control and deceive
Tie me or tempt me
Threaten or tease
Please me or punch me
I'm down on my knees
Kiss me or kick me
I'll take the abuse
Cherish or choke me
And I'll tie the noose
In sultry seclusion
It's sexual born
I'm misery's mistress
Of fury and scorn
Seduction and bruises
In satin and pain
I'll bleed my devotion
And yearning again
For God's sake now hold me
All battered and torn
I'm your blood red rose
And you are my thorn
Author notes
This poem is my interpretation of a vague request to write about the duality within a particular relationship. I hope that I was able to capture the essence of the request in my work.
A contest entry
- Big points...Make me cry. by EdibleRoses.
1800 points, ended February 14, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Did this encompass the duality of emotions within a turbulent relationship?
Comments
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Well you certainly have alot of natural writing talent!
I really like the title and the poem.......superb!
SilverButterfly
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This was so wow hun, I absolutely loved it. I think you did an excellent job writing this piece. I'm speechless to it for how much I liked reading it. You show alot of emotion in it, and that's great to do in writing. Keep up the wonderful work.
much love always
~~Tori~~
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Most definitely, it did. Really powerful.
Thanks for entering, lovely work.
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