You make me laugh
You make me smile
But yet again all the while
You're ripping my heart right in two
Every time I look at you
I'm seeing stars
I'll wish forever
But I know it could never
So I live with this fear
because all I want is you near
Things are great
At least they seem
We make quite the perfect team
And when we break, I know its true
I'll never ever get over you
You'll break my heart
I know you will
With no regard to how I'll feel
I just know that deep inside
It will end because I cried
This ending that I know will come
I dont want it to
But there's nothing I can do
But I know now by count of three
That it will be the death of me
Author notes
"You're not friends. You'll never be friends. You'll be in love till it kills you both. You'll fight, and you'll shag, and you'll hate each other till it makes you quiver, but you'll never be friends. Love isn't brains, children, it's blood...blood screaming inside you to work its will. I may be love's bitch, but at least I'm man enough to admit it."
-Spike, Buffy The Vampire Slayer
half inspired by this quote
A contest entry
- Big points...Make me cry. by EdibleRoses.
1800 points, ended February 14, 2008, 11 entries
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i really like this poem, i like the thoughts you have put into this i love the rhyme it flows nicley, and i love how it says that about everything bad and that without that person that you will be nothing it really says a lot, good luck in the contest and keep writing, -Amy
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interesting inspiration...lol. Good poem in general, kinda lose the rhyme scheme sometimes despite how ard u tried to to maintain it...good job, and keep writing!
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This reminded me of my own life, I think that this is really beautiful. You have just made my day. Thank you.
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this is such a sweet yet sad, moving poem! well done!
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loved it !
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wow this is really good and it really relates to my life so I like it alot. great job
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Love this one. It really relates a lot to my situation.
Thanks for entering =]
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