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Woolly sheep

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I am a woolly sheep
I am sensitive and  deep
I am compassionate and quiet
I never cause a riot
I am artistic
although sometimes
I am unrealistic
I am creative and unique
I think my thoughts are deep

I totally agree

that I am a woolly sheep

baa baa

Author notes

who are you
something differant i agree i am a wooly sheep baa baa my star sign is the ram and chinese sign is the sheep this is true to my charactor.

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  • FallenHero
    October 5
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    Haha, this one made me laugh. Its cute. I like the picture goes very well with the writing lol. Nice flow and the rhyme was nice, excellent write! Do you write a lot like this?

  • vishal
    October 4
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    great write! the picture adds to the poem by encouraging the readers imagination.

    I had trouble with riot. I had/have no clue its supposed to rhyme with quiet. I am not a native speaker - I guess I should not even try ( poetry).

    baa baa,
    Vishal

  • Meroza gold member
    September 28
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    Aw, I love this one. Its so sweet and did you know sheeps are my favorite animal along with frogs and cats?!

    The background is wonderful as well!

    Congrats on the shiny, it was well earned!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    September 21

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    Creative adn Unique..I agree and think this is a great poem...It should of done better tnan HM. I.d lke you to read my pome dragonheartl... Thanks

  • krizaa
    September 21

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    I like how you wrote this ...simple and playful. that picture is awesome


  • slick99
    September 15

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    woolly sheep

    this is very cute. i like the background and the picture!! and of course the poem!!! keep writing!! -slick99

  • Wima001
    August 25
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    I can relate!


  • samiceylanc
    August 22
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    Şirin Bir Şiir
    (it sounds lovely
  • BrokenSanity
    August 10

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    awww, this is sweet! i am the ram too, hehe. when is ur b day? love the rhythm here too, keep it up!


  • smonte19124 silver member
    August 10
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    Very sweet poem, I liked it very much and congratulation on the HM. God Bless


  • marsu
    August 2
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    nice write, good form too

  • Topnotchsy
    July 31
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    Interesting write, congrats on the honorable mention, this was definitely "something different."

  • Beret55 silver member
    July 18
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    With my hard head, i'm prob an old goat.. hehe
    That was a sweet poem..


  • Hetha gold member
    July 11

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    aww..this is cute and adorable, sweetie Love the background and tag..so perfect for this delightful, rhyming write. Good luck!


  • aboomer silver member
    July 10

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    How delightful! Cute and it had such a happy rhyme and feel to it. Very enjoyable.
    Congrats. on the HM


  • Lislaine
    July 2

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    awww

    this is sooo cutee awww and the rhyming is awesomee.. It´s very wonderful how some people can discribe themself.. May the ink of your pen keep on flowing


  • crazymomma
    June 28

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    I love this! Now you have me wanting to do one for gemini, my sign. This was so cute. It is cool that your chinese sign is sheep too. LOL


  • myron silver member
    June 28

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    light

    This is a strange, light-hearted poem composed in a sing-song rhythm. I would have liked to have seen more depth in it. That's what i find so strange in it. It seems to be conflicting because twice you tell us you are deep, yet there doesn't seem to be depth to this poem (unless i missed it).

    Oh wait on! Now I am thinking that this poem is ironic!

    nicely done,
    myron.

  • Topnotchsy
    June 25

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    Very cute write. Can see why it won an honorable mention. Looking at the contest title "something different" this was definitely not your standard run of the mill poem idea and I enjoyed it.


  • Hekate gold member
    June 23

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    Lol this was so very very cute, and it totally made me smile! I started having the song baabaa black sheep going through my mind lol


  • Dove Moderators member
    June 21
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    lol, this gave me a chuckle, nice work


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 16
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    Ah, the talking sheep. Yes. very nicely done and cute!


  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    June 13
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    Hehe

    Adorable maralisa lol I loved this poem. Am gonna read on I think hehe
  • sgking123
    June 7

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    excellent

    wow you did an easy write with a difficult topic.
    It cannot get any better.
    You are definitly talented.
    Pls visit some of my works.liked these two:

    I totally agree

    that I am a woolly sheep

  • libithina
    May 21

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    Ahh an aries full of energy and fire

  • toomysterious
    May 9
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    Very cute. You have a contagious personality, light and airy. I like this very much.


  • fangs to blame
    May 9

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    BA BA BA Brilliant

    I love this poem Maralisa it has a nice flow that i wouldn't mind reading numrous times. Three annyoing little yellow men for you.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 4

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    Hahahahha, brilliant. writing. Great flow to this. Really strong imagery too. Congratulations on the trophy. Great rhyme.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • Kram
    May 3
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    nice presentation

    it is presented simple and cute , with fine background .....ya


  • Mezclita
    April 28
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    yes, cute indeed


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 24

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    Cute poem; easy to read and understsand. Like the presentation on this page too. Good flow,rhythm and rhyme.

  • celadia
    April 22
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    This is a great children's poem, you could make a book if all your work is this good.


  • Lucky-Charm
    April 2

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    At first, I was kind of sceptical.After reading it,I understood where you were coming from.It was different and that's what I wanted.Thank you so much and goodluck.I can also relate to this one as well.
  • ian sawicki silver member
    March 31

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    hehehe laughing at the end of the poem, some softer sides in the middle of the poem though - i have a serious poem about sheep though not psoted right now


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    March 30

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    Cute

    This is very funny and well written. I love little pieces like this to brighten up my day. Thank you for sharing it with us here. Well Done! ~Peace~Gar

  • Great Cthulhu
    March 15

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    Fun!

    In your next to the last line, did you mean 'wooly'? This was a fun, tongue in cheek poem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for entering!

  • whispernthedark gold member
    March 1

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    This is a thinker, very creative.... Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper

  • Riftkin gold member
    February 21
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    Thank you for entering this contest. Hope you had fun finding out more about yourself. Riftkin


  • Star Shine gold member
    February 19
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    This is fun with a good rhyme and a nice lively rhythm. Well done.

  • maralisa silver member
    February 9
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    my mum s poem is fantastico
    baa baa lol
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