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Woolly sheep

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I am a woolly sheep
I am sensitive and  deep
I am compassionate and quiet
I never cause a riot
I am artistic
although sometimes
I am unrealistic
I am creative and unique
I think my thoughts are deep

I totally agree

that I am a woolly sheep

baa baa

Author notes

who are you
something differant i agree i am a wooly sheep baa baa my star sign is the ram and chinese sign is the sheep this is true to my charactor.

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 1

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    excellent~

    This is too cute
    Thanks for the grin
    Congrats on the Honorable Mention
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Harrisham Minhas
    April 12

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    This is cute.




  • Flowergirl
    April 2
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    very nice i think this is a very cute piece nice job and well put together.......

  • City Rose
    March 22

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    Awesome rhyme scheme...and it really says so much about you. I can tell, by your poetry alone, that you are deep. I hope you're not so woolly. Oh, this was a precious piece and congrats on the green booger. It deserves more.

  • arunparui
    March 21

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    Baa baa woolly sheep!

    I wish to make a nice flowery blanket to cover the ionosphere- level to protect this contemporary world from self destruction by crazy acts of polluting our only a unique Globe in this vast universe by sweet words of verse.Please let me permit to collect your sensitive,deep,compassionate,quiet,never causing a riot,artistic,creative,unique, but not unrealistic feelings(wools) in need from my next meet of your allpoetry addings.The "Woolly Sheep" is very lucid and thought provoking.Thanks!


  • Ken-Maverick
    March 9

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    Love the humor in this,
    you rhyme very well poet,
    and again congrats on the shiney well deserved

    Ken


  • Callisto Athena gold member
    March 8

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    What a delightful, sweet and funny poem, Hon.. You have a wonderful talent for both writing and graphics, don't ever stop doing either..


  • DolphinLass silver member
    February 27
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    very cleverly written


  • log-home-guy-Nic
    February 25
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    I really like this one

    I am also aries. but chinese sign is monkey. Still this one fits me. Thanks for shairing it.


  • goat1826
    February 10
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    Beware of Kiwis
    with gum boots
    and velcrove gloves lol


  • ChelseySmile
    January 26

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    I love this poem. It's warm, and cute and soft. I love the rhyming.

    I love how you ended it with "Baa baa"


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    January 19

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    Very nice rhyming maralisa! I like those all about me poems! I don't really pay attention to astrology stuff, but guess what sign I am.


  • astrum infractus
    January 18

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    Aw, this is adorable.
    I love sheep.




  • Joseph Hollis
    January 1

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    Such a cute and charming write. I enjoyed the lighthearted nature of this. Left me with a smile. Well done.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    December 28, 2008

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    lol, Sis I know and understand who you are...I am a Ram and I am this but much worse...

    Love,
    sis


  • lindaburns gold member
    December 27, 2008

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    There are worse things one could be and the sheep seems to be content with its sheepness. It’s light hearted but in (at lease) a semi serious way. I would be satisfied to have written this. Linda

  • Liveloveperforming
    December 26, 2008

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    Just great

    The way you have used rhyme and clear characterisation here is really witty. When reading the poem I could imagine those thoughts belonging to a real sheep. To tell you the truth, that’s why I like so much, making something humorous and realistic is no easy task. Full credit goes to you for producing an unconventional but genius work of poetry.


  • oceanbluize
    December 25, 2008

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    Rock on....... and nice rhyme. lol. I love this poem very entertaining. I can see why you received a HM. Great poem!
    ocean.


  • Flowergirl
    December 10, 2008
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    love it very nice keep it up.

  • ea silver member
    December 3, 2008

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    ah, this is my stern sign too but I have curly horns, as well. Cute one, and makes me think of that Christmas carol of the animals, the sheep's part. Happy Holidays-


  • Vickie J
    November 28, 2008
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    This was cute and your background was simply adorable, congratulations on your HM~vj


  • poetrandy
    November 15, 2008

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    Very Cute!

    Interesting write! I think there is something here beyond the literal! This little poem reeks with signs of something bigger! I think the author is probably talking about herself or someone vey close to her! Good job!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    October 12, 2008
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    This is very cute! Sweet, fun poem with a lovely background. Love the graphic of the ram!


  • FallenHero
    October 5, 2008

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    Haha, this one made me laugh. Its cute. I like the picture goes very well with the writing lol. Nice flow and the rhyme was nice, excellent write! Do you write a lot like this?

  • vishal
    October 4, 2008

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    great write! the picture adds to the poem by encouraging the readers imagination.

    I had trouble with riot. I had/have no clue its supposed to rhyme with quiet. I am not a native speaker - I guess I should not even try ( poetry).

    baa baa,
    Vishal


  • Meroza
    September 28, 2008

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    Aw, I love this one. Its so sweet and did you know sheeps are my favorite animal along with frogs and cats?!

    The background is wonderful as well!

    Congrats on the shiny, it was well earned!


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Creative adn Unique..I agree and think this is a great poem...It should of done better tnan HM. I.d lke you to read my pome dragonheartl... Thanks


  • charcoal
    September 21, 2008

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    I like how you wrote this ...simple and playful. that picture is awesome


  • Slick99
    September 15, 2008

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    woolly sheep

    this is very cute. i like the background and the picture!! and of course the poem!!! keep writing!! -slick99


  • Wima001
    August 25, 2008
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    I can relate!


  • csAd
    August 22, 2008
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    Şirin Bir Şiir
    (it sounds lovely


  • BrokenSanity
    August 10, 2008

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    awww, this is sweet! i am the ram too, hehe. when is ur b day? love the rhythm here too, keep it up!


  • smonte19124 gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    Very sweet poem, I liked it very much and congratulation on the HM. God Bless


  • marsu
    August 2, 2008
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    nice write, good form too

  • Topnotchsy
    July 31, 2008
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    Interesting write, congrats on the honorable mention, this was definitely "something different."


  • Beret55 silver member
    July 18, 2008
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    With my hard head, i'm prob an old goat.. hehe
    That was a sweet poem..


  • Hetha gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    aww..this is cute and adorable, sweetie Love the background and tag..so perfect for this delightful, rhyming write. Good luck!


  • aboomer silver member
    July 10, 2008

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    How delightful! Cute and it had such a happy rhyme and feel to it. Very enjoyable.
    Congrats. on the HM


  • Lislaine
    July 2, 2008

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    awww

    this is sooo cutee awww and the rhyming is awesomee.. It´s very wonderful how some people can discribe themself.. May the ink of your pen keep on flowing


  • crazymomma
    June 28, 2008

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    I love this! Now you have me wanting to do one for gemini, my sign. This was so cute. It is cool that your chinese sign is sheep too. LOL


  • myron silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    light

    This is a strange, light-hearted poem composed in a sing-song rhythm. I would have liked to have seen more depth in it. That's what i find so strange in it. It seems to be conflicting because twice you tell us you are deep, yet there doesn't seem to be depth to this poem (unless i missed it).

    Oh wait on! Now I am thinking that this poem is ironic!

    nicely done,
    myron.

  • Topnotchsy
    June 25, 2008

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    Very cute write. Can see why it won an honorable mention. Looking at the contest title "something different" this was definitely not your standard run of the mill poem idea and I enjoyed it.


  • Kari gold member
    June 23, 2008

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    Lol this was so very very cute, and it totally made me smile! I started having the song baabaa black sheep going through my mind lol


  • FifthDove
    June 21, 2008
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    lol, this gave me a chuckle, nice work


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 16, 2008
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    Ah, the talking sheep. Yes. very nicely done and cute!


  • Zenda-Lokki gold member
    June 13, 2008
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    Hehe

    Adorable maralisa lol I loved this poem. Am gonna read on I think hehe


  • sgking123
    June 7, 2008

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    excellent

    wow you did an easy write with a difficult topic.
    It cannot get any better.
    You are definitly talented.
    Pls visit some of my works.liked these two:

    I totally agree

    that I am a woolly sheep


  • libithina
    May 21, 2008

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    Ahh an aries full of energy and fire


  • toomysterious
    May 9, 2008
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    Very cute. You have a contagious personality, light and airy. I like this very much.


  • fangs to blame
    May 9, 2008

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    BA BA BA Brilliant

    I love this poem Maralisa it has a nice flow that i wouldn't mind reading numrous times. Three annyoing little yellow men for you.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 4, 2008

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    Hahahahha, brilliant. writing. Great flow to this. Really strong imagery too. Congratulations on the trophy. Great rhyme.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • Kram
    May 3, 2008
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    nice presentation

    it is presented simple and cute , with fine background .....ya


  • Mezclita
    April 28, 2008
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    yes, cute indeed


  • grannyeri gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Cute poem; easy to read and understsand. Like the presentation on this page too. Good flow,rhythm and rhyme.

  • celadia
    April 22, 2008
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    This is a great children's poem, you could make a book if all your work is this good.


  • Lucky-Charm
    April 2, 2008

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    At first, I was kind of sceptical.After reading it,I understood where you were coming from.It was different and that's what I wanted.Thank you so much and goodluck.I can also relate to this one as well.


  • individuality gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    hehehe laughing at the end of the poem, some softer sides in the middle of the poem though - i have a serious poem about sheep though not psoted right now


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    March 30, 2008

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    Cute

    This is very funny and well written. I love little pieces like this to brighten up my day. Thank you for sharing it with us here. Well Done! ~Peace~Gar


  • Great Cthulhu
    March 15, 2008

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    Fun!

    In your next to the last line, did you mean 'wooly'? This was a fun, tongue in cheek poem. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for entering!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    March 1, 2008

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    This is a thinker, very creative.... Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

    ♥
    whisper


  • Riftkin gold member
    February 21, 2008
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    Thank you for entering this contest. Hope you had fun finding out more about yourself. Riftkin


  • Star Shine
    February 19, 2008
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    This is fun with a good rhyme and a nice lively rhythm. Well done.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 9, 2008
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    my mum s poem is fantastico
    baa baa lol

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