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You Want a Sister?

I hear you want a sister
I want one too
I think we can solve our problem
So here is what we will do

You will be my sister
And I'll love you to death
I will always be there for you
Till I breathe my last breath

 

You will be my sister

Forever till we part

Although I hope that never happens

It would break my heart

 

I'm missing my sister now

So will you be the one

I hope you and I will be best buds

My quest for a loving sister is now done.

 

Author notes

dragon24 - I want to be your sister

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • Cat10
    June 12, 2008

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    thank you for entering! such a cute poem! I really liked it! and no, your rhyming did not seem forced to me. great job and good luck!


  • With Broken Wings
    May 9, 2008
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    Hii!! Id love to have u as a sister!


  • Lil Ma 6969-
    February 15, 2008
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    Thanks you for entry my contest....ur poem is neet different from most of them i read...i want to ask you some question bout if i let u be in my family how can u help me.....lol if you dont want to anwser them that fine also...i let you be my sister but one question u need to anwser my big sis or lil sis or twin....

    Love Always,
    Monica
    AKA
    ~Lil Ma'


  • angel of the dead
    February 12, 2008
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    hey honey yep ur my sister glad you entered!!1


  • Angelic Princess21
    February 11, 2008

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    please put your ap name and what you would like to be in the author notes you have a very good write here thank you for entering just please read the rules next time.
    s and best of luck
    Babygirl

  • angel of the dead
    February 11, 2008

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    you are going to be my sister
    that is true
    i really have to have you!!!
    i love the poem and i need your name so i can put you on my page!!!!!


  • Tarja
    February 8, 2008

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    This was sweet. AP families are such a cute concept. I have one myself. Good luck with this... I hope you get a sister.

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