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Bleeding hearts

In front of me appeared to be
my bleeding heart
that I
had cut out
of my own
chest.
It was beating
slowly as my
blood dripped
from it
like all of
my tears before
I cut out
my eyes
that knew your
body like
a photograph

Author notes

Dark thoughts to finish #2

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  • takemypainaway
    February 22, 2008

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    this is good...

    actually it reminds me of my earlier writing

    i love the darkness and the severity of your words

    thank you for entering the contest...

    --kat


  • Morrigan Trinity
    February 12, 2008

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    Love it!
    Wow, how similar to how I feel most of the time... Doesn't feel like it's ever going to change, but I'm sure as hell gonna try for the people that I still have left.
    Great poem, pet. Good luck.