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An Empty Seat

An Empty Seat
Right next to me
Or across, whatever you perfer
But still quite close,
that empty seat

It haunts my soul
that empty seat
for the one who sat there
I never got to meet
the one who sat in the empty seat


So cold,
So plain,
So close,
So indescribable
My heart shall never stand for it

 

I keep watch for him every day

for the pain in the empty seat

shall be sent away

once you take place in that forlorn place

just gives my soul back

 

The love is lost

in that empty seat

all it's spirit

has blown into the nothingness

of the day

just fill my heart

that empty seat

 

So cold,

So plain,

So close,

So indescribable

My heart shall never stand for it

 

 

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  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    March 26, 2008

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    this touched me in an indescribable way. i feel the pain you depicted so wonderfully in this poem and that is partly because i've been here and i still am. wow that captured my attention fully.


  • BlaqkAudioBabe
    March 16, 2008
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    love has its ways of being cruel and you can capture it in the act


  • ClandestineDreams
    February 10, 2008
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    You miss him that much. You do relieze he may never come back to school again.

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