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Falling leaves

The autumn leave fell
from the canopy of heaven
touching the cerulean air
descending to the ground
like a soft pillow feather

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 11, 2008

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    G'Day maralisa

    How absolutely gorgeous this write; I adore the sweet imagery you created in this

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    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • poetryality silver member
    February 8, 2008
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    You used the word "Falling" in your title. DQ'd! SORRY!


    Renee