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and maybe they're right



I’ll never be able to get back up again.
The ones who care
Regurgitate their advice repetitively
But it’s easier said
Than accomplished
My two feet can’t come to a compromise
Which way to go
Or how to properly stand
-Tall and strong-
It isn’t an option anymore

I’ve watched others conquer my emotions
        I let them
Just the right manipulation to tear me down
My weakness is their truth
(If the majority believes
Then statistics show accuracy)
The odds are not in my favor

Words that push a person to their limit
Cut through skin
And are never forgotten
The only thing they have left me with
Is the thought
That maybe I do need to change

Please tell me what you think

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  • xXblackenedXroseXx
    February 8, 2008

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    Advice really has no purpose. If it's advice the person agrees with, it's simply a form of comfort. If it's advice the person disagrees with, it's pushed aside. People have to find things about for themselves. Whether they're right or wrong in their advice.. you will only truly know once you've experienced it.

    I say just follow your heart.. and let time tell what's right.