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wired

I am up again, against
those starched business types.
Catching the way pool-sticks
Bend the pub lights.

Disciplined retinas notice
Glock .44 under suspenders.
Motioning in a beckon,
bespectacled waved five benders.

Pulling my earlobes
down into his whisper.
They say you're a cop
A dirty bread winner.

Never before have I
dripped perspiration.
My contact's at events
So I'm left separated.

Swearing to the Virgin
I denied accusation
I'll pray forgiveness later
Avoiding coronary deprivation.

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about an undercover assignment

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  • ecrivain01
    July 7, 2008
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    Intriguing write ...

    and I'm not even going to ask what kind of assignment.



  • still.she.waits
    March 18, 2008

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    i didnt need to read the authors note to know this was aundercover assignment, you told the story perfectly. good job


  • Tamera
    February 26, 2008

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    a very tense moment I am sure! I am most impressed. No wasted words, the words chosen for impact. examples "Disciplined retinas" and "bespeckled waved five benders" I am glad you are still around to write about it. If you're still undercover, be careful, and thanks for being out there.