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[ What a sad day ]

What a sad day
When a man is swayed
By the love of a woman
Evil by nature
And off he went
With no other way
But his love for a woman
Always did stay

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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    February 8, 2008

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    This is truly a cute poem. Thank you for entering my contest. Its a short and simple poem that says a lot in such a few words. I likes.

    Dani