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Land Mine


We’re at the both ends of the world:
You shouted you love me
And you’re waiting for me to be there
To start our lives together,

But you planted short-fused bombs
Underneath the spongy soil,
Ready to be detonated
With my one wrong move –

Oh you really can’t wait!

Author notes

prompt: I want to believe...

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  • Danna Hobart
    March 2, 2008
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    This is brilliant! Thank you for entering.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 8, 2008

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    This is a really unique take-off on the prompt, I feel.
    I wish you success with it in the contest