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Celestrial Dream


Jasmine dreams
from the incarnadine moon
possessing the jade jealosy
from the goddess




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  • Blooming Poet
    March 21, 2008

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    That is an amazing description of a dream and the title just blew me away, it is so creative. I love it. Amazing word choice as always, great picture painted with so few words.


  • Naridill
    February 9, 2008

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    'Jade jealously'

    Perhaps Jaded or even jade emotions. But apart from that, something different is always good.

    Thanks for entering,