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If I had one more day with you...

If I had one more day with you...

This is what we would do...

We would go to the beach...

And we can hold hands just like we used to...

And we can be happy...

We can kiss over and over again...

And we can love each other just like we used to...

Again and Again...

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  • Renees Forever
    March 27

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    I love this its soo sweet and sounds like something i would do. Whoever this was for must be special in your heart.


  • mjlovestheatlantic gold member
    February 19
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    Awesome job! I absolutely loved it! This person must have been very special to you!
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    February 14
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    I really like this it is a great piece one more day would be the best day that I could make it life is a precious gif that should always be treaured

    I am returning the favor for my daughter
    sweetlittleprincess
    you commeted on her poem thank you for your kindness Have a lovely evening