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Darkeness Of My Dreams

I am alone in a dark room
for just a couple minutes it seems
before I sense someone else in the room with me
you then jump at me and hold me down, breathing heavily on my neck 
saying it will only hurt for a little while
I scream but no sound comes out,
I struggle to get free but your to strong
a sharp pain like a knife slicing me from between my legs up to my stomach
it seems like hours went by before you finally get off me and leave my room
I wake up gasp[ing for air
and I realize it was just a dream once again

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  • Romily
    February 10, 2008
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    Awesome

    Really appreciated your poetry. It's great & nicely flowed.


    love these lines:
    "before I sense someone else in the room with me
    you then jump at me and hold me down, breathing heavily on my neck
    saying it will only hurt for a little while"