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~Chimerical camouflage~


Deciduous acceptance;

where deception is only seen
beneath the foliage,
during their fall.


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  • Luminescence
    March 3, 2008
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    Very nicely written... you chose great words... writing a poem that can only contain thirteen words is always a challenge because you have to tell a whole litte story in such a short amount of time...
    Great work...

    Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck,
    ~lumin


  • Naridill
    February 9, 2008

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    'foliage' [reminds me of that simpson episode where Marge says it wrong and Lisa corrects her, and she says 'Thats what I said "folidge"' Hehe]

    Love this piece, though. The end is a little less than a bang but still phrasing is intriguing.

    Thanks for entering,

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    February 8, 2008
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    Excellent.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    these are stunning words which convey alot in them to leave the reader pondering over them. truly inspiring