I hate you
everything about you
makes me want to die
your voice, your face
Fire would be a nice way to go
No oxygen would be better
no use in this world
It would be easier
I hate you
you would never understand
why i hate you
so much
you think your better
but your not so
just go away
and I will finally be happy...
Author notes
I apologize for being human
A contest entry
- Taking it out on you... by Flightless Raven.
1200 points, ended February 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest with me
Comments
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unfortunately they never go away. One leaves, another takes it's place.
i liked this peice. there are lots of people i'd like to see go away. -
A hateful piece indeed, very well penned. Good luck in the contest with it.....I love the background to, it's awesome
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i like how you really but a lot of emotion in ur poem it rocks
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Hmm...
I´m in a better mood now, so i not gonna be harsh anymore, this piece was well written, though... i see not misspellings, or grammatical errors...thereś a flow, amazingly, without a rhyme, thats quite unique, i see you read what i wrote in my instructions..wonderfully done.
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