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Virgin





A virgin, lively, beautiful 'neath zephyr
to rip me with a coup wing drunk;
as a lake hard to forgot haunting under ice
in transparent glacier flights not to escape.

Dancing under the luminous sky,
a wind born from cocoon of your lips,
humid hair flies, fluttering on the pollen,
feverish of my flower in spring.

In warm colouring, impregnated;
love, passion, sensuality,
seducing between bare sensations
in dew bathed by drizzle
of petals, open seas, shoots of soil.

Let your softnesses inebriate
senses in my innermost thoughts,
swept by wind of warm whiffs.







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Prompt: Picture..Option 10 - Wind beneath me

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    Amazing words and a most wonderful penned piece
    I loved the third stanza so much
    Thank you for your entry
    Julie