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How Can I Love You My Lovely Princess?

How can I love you
You hate me already
I want you to say "I Love You Too"
But you can never love me
If I call you, would you give me a chance
If I give you a rose, would you marry me
If I say sorry, would we have romance
If I said I didn't love you anymore, would you disagree
Please don't cry my princess
To let my lovely princess cry will surely break my heart
Please don't be heartless
For it too, will somehow break my heart apart
Keep breathing 'cause I'm not leaving you anymore
Believe me, hold on to me and never let me go
Stop breathing if I see you with a paramour
But if you're not with one, then I will bestow you Cupid's bow
My Lovely Princess


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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 27, 2008

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    This is such a sweet piece... I think you entered this one twice into the contest, but its really sweet. thanks.


  • Frozentearz
    February 11, 2008
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    I think you need to go back and re-read the rules of our contest.
    Frozentearz


  • xXsoulxcollectorXx
    February 9, 2008
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    is this one for bernadette then???mighty ah...