You have seen me,
You have heard of me,
You might have liked me,
But I could not match.
I talk of spirituality
Which hardly I could master,
After going for a while
I am afraid, lest I cannot prolong.
I have read wonderful words,
I have met moments
With delightful feelings,
But I could not yet
Find out the source of it
So that I can fetch it
Whenever I want!
I go around the world,
Meet all sweet souls,
They like to join me
In the grand festival of
Sat Chit Ananda,
The Existence, Knowledge,
Bliss Absolute.
My quest for Him, The Truth
Knows no bound.
I want you too to follow
The day I shall discover Him,
Oh my all beloved,
I like to give Him to you.
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A contest entry
- In The Soul by whatever666.
600 points, ended April 15, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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lovely. i didn't realize spirituality is something that can be mastered... but ok.
Thank you for entering.
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A beautiful poem. It's not exactly clear on whether or not "Him" refers to God or some person. Other than that it was a great poem. Best of luck to you in the contest
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Him? are you talking about a God? that is the feeling I get from the last three lines.
It's well crafted story.
Thank you for entering.
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This is very good work, but I'm not seeing how it relates to my contest. Can you please clue me in?
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This was great. I liked it.It showed your emotion.I hope you find your HIM.
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Thank you very much for wishing me to find HIM while commenting on my poem, "My sweet souls".
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Wow, good poem! Congrats on your HM
Best wishes in the contest
Magikal Fairy Poet
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dear brother,
thank you so much for your poetic offering ... I feel very honored and full of joy to reread your poem and to add it to my special "treasure chest" ... it is a true spiritual gem for me ...
much love,
marion
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Beautiful and tender
We want to give what we love to the people we love - this is the gift of a generous and questing heart. We are all somewhere on this road, and we look for people bringing back stories from our destination.
Thank you for this lovely gift for Marion's celebration.
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WOW
wow beautifully written is all i can say it was that good -
You portray your journey well with great love and conviction. Good luck in the contest
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a nicely written piece thanks for entering
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it is hard to write a spiritual poem that doesn't sound cliche or cheesy. you have done it. congratulations, good write. thanks for entering.
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Thanks for your nice comments and encouragements.
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You may not 'match', but you are matchless here in this write...ever the seeker and when He who is sought is found you share this wondrous gift...and so you already have begun to do so, here and now...Blessings to you, Rhonda
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dearest brother,
I join you in your observation that it is extremely difficult, if not impossible to express that which cannot be expressed ... but the mission of our soul-songs is to point to the source of all songs ... silence ...
and isn't it the silence that gives value to the song ? and the space that carry the objects present within it ?
your desire to show others how to focus their consciousness on what is eternal instead on dwelling on the impermanent aspect of duality, shows of a great and generous soul filled with wisdom ...
thank you,
sister maa
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Love it!
A beautiful poem about a quest for the spiritual,
But I could not yet
Find out the source of it
So that I can fetch it
Whenever I want!
I especially like that after you discover Him, The Truth, you wish to share your faith with others.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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I love what you have done here. We can never get enough there's no such thing as too much. We must go to him though I bring him to you for he is in me where ever I am.
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