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Happy Birthday To You And You And You (silver trophy)

I thought I’d send each of you
a happy birthday card to say
how great it is to sing and laugh
in celebration of your birthday

But Ephiphany got romantic
it being the month of valentines
she decided to sing a love song
and messed up the happy birthday lines

With partying on her mind
the thought of a guy made her swoon
she tripped and fell in love
with the old man in the moon

Then a pretty countrybabe came by
all spruced up and enchanting
carrying a frilly  birthday cake
so big it left her panting

The candles, too many to count
it didn’t matter anyway
just blow ’em out she said
there’s enough for each birthday

But as the embers slowly faded
stardust had one more to go
she huffed and puffed and blew
as hard as she could blow

Then my happy birthday card
so painstakingly selected
was caught by that one
burning flame, totally unexpected

So I guess you’re all left with
just the one thing you can do
join in the song and laughter
as we say Happy Birthday to

… You and You and You


Dee Garner
February 7, 2008

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  • Yemassee gold member
    February 24, 2008
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    and what luck...today is my birthday!

    So were they having real birthdays or fake ones...don't ask has fake ones...I know this guy...

    A big cake? I read something about a big cake...

    and congrats on that silver thingie.


    • catz Moderators member
      February 24, 2008

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      Happy Birthday, Yem Now see, if you had joined the group this contest would have been for you too Yes, it's for real birthdays.. each month we do a birthday contest for members with birthdays that month
      Yep, the cake was big enough for you, too

      Pink flamingos???!!! Geese, Yem... they must been blown off course 'cuz they don't grow in Maine

      Thanks for the read and cool comment

      • Yemassee gold member
        February 24, 2008

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        Plastic pink flamingoes are sort of popular in Maine, at least as a kitschy joke. We're an odd bunch. We also liked those bend-over-Bettys, you know, those wood cut-outs of ladies bent over weeding or whatever and showing their wide backsides, lol.


  • individuality gold member
    February 18, 2008

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    the old man in the moon must me smiling, i will look out for him tonight in the sky, a good fun piece here


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    February 16, 2008

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    This was a great birthday entry...The birthday girls should all be happy with it..since I don't have one to write can I have half of your...

  • Warrior7
    February 16, 2008

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    This is fantastic i love it and no doubt the birthday girls are going to love it too.
    Excellent work


  • queen Moderators member
    February 16, 2008

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    This is awesome, i love it


  • Partners In Crime
    February 16, 2008

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    Absolutely a wonderful birthday poem hallmark quality without the pricetag thank you very much for the entry and good luck in the contest

  • annie
    February 15, 2008

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    wonderful flight

    Oh me, oh my, where is the white rabbit? I love this poem I have to read it agaain and again before I have tasted all the layers of your cake. I must reread... Love to you and your wandering, wondering mind. Bless you, Annie


  • warrior-eagle
    February 9, 2008
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    Lol
    this was great!

    ..Simply Me♥


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    lol, Catz this so cute, funny, and most of all beautifully written, you show your admiration, and friendship to your partners in crimes, good to see! a winner for sure! Moons

  • Just4u
    February 8, 2008
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    Happy birthday everyone...

    Hugs...Eddy

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